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After a few seconds,another hit!.

:iconelementalpenguin:-"Never mind...land doesnt hit your boat twice".
:iconsynchro593:-"the impact came from below the boat...something is attacking us!"

We rushed to look down to the water.
Lots of water type Pkmn were swimming around our boat and slamming themselves against it for no reason.

Gyarados,Sharpedos,Tentacruels.All sorts of menacing water pkmn.

:iconthe-swizzle:-"Why are they attacking us!?"
:icondelthero:-"This old boat wont stand too many hits.We gotta think of something,and fast!"

It was then that I noticed a grin on :iconelementalpenguin:'s face.

:iconsareii:-"Dude! what are you grinning about!?"
:iconelementalpenguin:-"I say...SCREW THE RULES!"


He reached the right pocket of his jacket...and took out a round object.



All of us:-"ITSA POKEBALL!" :dummy::dummy::dummy:



:iconelementalpenguin:-"Go Ampharos!"

The huge yellow Pokemon was then released.
Its fur was entirely filled with electricity,and the red orbs in its body were shining in an intense yellow.It was definitely a high leveled Ampharos.

:iconelementalpenguin:-"Now Ampharos,use 'Thunder' all around the boat!"

As soon as the order was given,the Ampharos raised its arms and stared firmly to the sky.Several Thunderbolts fell through the clouds,hitting the water surface,and shocking all the water pkmn around us.Most of them fainted right away,while others managed to escape.

:iconelementalpenguin:-"Excellent job,Ampharos! return!"

We all then rejoiced.If the Ampharos wouldn't have been brought by :iconelementalpenguin:,we might have become snacks for those sea monsters.

Unfortunately,the problems were far from over.

:iconsareii:-"Look! something huge is coming!"

An inmense wave was coming towards our boat!.
Lots of other water pkmns summoned the 'Surf' attack against us.



All of us: :iconohnoesplz:



:icontgdrode123:-"Everyone,hang on from something!"
:iconjethxvi:-"Oh sh-,oh sh-!"
:iconvisoris:-"We are SO dead!"

The giant wave was coming at us at a very fast pace.We had only a few seconds left.
Fortunately,:iconelementalpenguin: wasn't the only one who had a second thought about "rules"...

:iconrainbowpegasis:-"I knew it was a matter of time before we would need a second 'boat'"
:iconrockleon:-"huh? what?"

She took out a pokeball from her bag,and throw it at the sea.

:iconrainbowpegasis:-"Go Wailord!"

The gigantic behemoth,with its characteristic grin,was released inmediately into the water.

:iconrainbowpegasis:-"Ok Wailord...use 'lifeboat'!"
:iconsareii:-"what? is that a new move or something?"

A few seconds after :iconrainbowpegasis: gave the order,the Wailord opened its mouth big and wide,and let out its big tongue,inviting us all in.



All of us: :omg:



:iconrainbowpegasis:-"Lets jump right into..."

:iconnainteins:-"look out!"

:iconxxaurastarxx:-"NOOOOOOOOOOO!"

It was too late.
The wave crashed against the boat,knocking it over to a side,and finally swallowing all of us.

That's all I remember from that moment,after passing out.

...

...

I then woke up.I still remember the wet,hot and slimmy surface.

:iconsareii:-"Yuck!"

I wasn't alone in there.

:iconginjaninja93:-"Hey! She's waking up! please dont stand up,or you may annoy the big buddy"

I had a hard time trying to focus my sight on anything,let alone understanding what was going on.

:iconginjaninja93:-"Wow! Dont rush yourself...you knocked your head pretty hard,y'know?"

:iconsareii:-"Hmph! what?"

I slowly recovered my senses back.The first thing I noticed was the darkness surrounding us,except for a faint flashlight,a few meters away.

:iconjethxvi:-"...it still has some batteries left."

I finally remembered...the wailord!
We were inside the huge pokemon's mouth.

They explained to me how the boat broke in half,and where all sent under the water.Wailord submerged and rescued us one by one.

But not all of us.

...

:icontgdrode123::iconandrewoverload519::iconforrestanthony::iconironwolf09:
:iconrockleon::iconginjaninja93::iconsareii::icondelthero:
:iconottbettina::iconkellllly::iconghoterra::iconjethxvi:
:iconkila-t-e::iconrainbowpegasis::iconshinyscyther::iconscdifference:
:iconbolthound::icontenaciousdiva::icontheamishpiscodemon::iconaquabat9:

...

:iconsareii:-"Dont tell me the others...NO!"
:iconrainbowpegasis:-"I...I dont understand...Why would my Wailord leave the others behind? *Sob*"

We were all deeply sad for the loss of everyone else.I bursted in tears along with :iconrainbowpegasis:
But an idea hit me right away.

:iconsareii:-"Maybe...your Wailord couldn't find them...Maybe they vanished too!"

They all inmediately looked at me.Their faces changed,and hope was slightly regained.
We really didnt know what happens to the people who vanish,but we hoped they were just
taken to a safer place,out of this nightmare.
As for all of us,we only wanted to return home,to our beloved ones,and leave this experience behind...

:iconrainbowpegasis: gave the order to the wailord to search for the closest piece of land it could find.Hopefully,we would find civilization again.

But suddenly,Wailord stopped.

:iconrainbowpegasis:-"Wailord? What happened? Why did you stop?

The Pokemon opened its mouth,and a fresh breeze came in.

:iconottbettina:-"Where are we?"

We left the Huge beast mouth,and stared amazed at what we had in front of us.
We were...on a huge island.

:iconsareii:-"It cant be!...Phantasm island!?"

It was a huge,almost perfectly rounded island,filled with kilometers of palms and trees near its shores.
At the end of the beach,we could see a gigantic stone platform,surrounded by ancient colums.
Behind this platform,a strange,black,and very very tall monolith was standing.
The monolith had strange carvings on its surface,filled with weird looking pokemon sketches.

I,with all my research experience,couldnt identify a single one of those Pokemon.

We also noticed the strange "sky" above us...
There was no sky at all!
It was like atmosphere was definitely gone,and you could stare directly at all the galaxies and stars,with all sorts of colors.
It was a very beautiful sight to behold.

After looking around,we all reunited in the center of the platform.

:iconrainbowpegasis:-"Well then...now what?"

...

A strange,but familiar voice interrupted us.

???:-"Now,you fight."

Right next to the end of the platform,and above a tall,rocky plateau,a shadow figure was waiting.
A strange Pokemon I've never seen before was standing behind.

:iconsareii:-"Its...You!...THE CLOAKED WOMAN!"

The others:-"WHAT!?"

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Phew,well guys,yet another rushed story.:p

I do it as fast as I can,so you can finally know the winners of this contest.

I have to go to the doctor tomorrow,so I really dont know If I'll be able to get some time to finish the story.

We are finally reaching the end now...
Maybe tomorrow,or maybe on saturday,you will have the final chapter,along with the final 12 winners.


Congratulations to those who made it this far!.:iconthumbsupplz:

Oh,by the way...this is how the Cloaked woman would look like (but with her eyes covered):
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Yup,the inspiration came from "Theresa" from "Fable 2".
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:icongiggles-the-panda:
Oh Noes! I finnally got sucked inot the vortex o.o

Anywho i told myself i would be happy if I could just make it into the top 50 and I did >:D and even though it would've been nice to stay on board i guess it wasnt ment to be.

good luck to you all!! :D
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:iconseriesartiststarter:
I see, so a few made it but not the ones i was hoping for, all the same everyone good luck and this story is getting better now! cant wait for the rest
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:iconkellllly:
~kellllly Jul 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Omg I can't believe I'm still in!! 8D ;A; The other entries are all so great, some of the stories braught tears to my eyes, mine is so lame compared to them XD I'm tore between myself wanting to win and me wanting the other great entries to win XD
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:iconrockleon:
Not gonna lie, i was incredible suprised i still made it lol.
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:iconpantaroparatroopa:
~PantaroParatroopa Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm... I'm beginning to think I didn't make it... </ObviousFakeIgnorantBliss>

Even if I did make it into the top 100 (still, 100 is a big number, I still wonder why I didn't get in), I suspect I would be gone at this point.
Unless parallel universe me is lucky.
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:iconvisoris:
Ah well poor Raision is not a true legend (oh well he is to me!)
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:iconginjaninja93:
oh my god I'm still alve! I can't believe I made it this far! Thnx so much =D
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:icondragonith:
*Dragonith Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol SCREW THE RULES! I HAVE AMPHAROS!
:XD:
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:iconjethxvi:
~JethXVI Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist
:iconjethxvi: takes out a strange looking pokeball unlike the eyes of everyone has ever seen. He lifts it up to the sky and yells out "POKERANGER RED!" and the pokeball lets out it's red laser engulfing :iconjethxvi:. The passengers were amazed, he was part of the Pokerangers, the Charmeleon Knight!

....sorry, I hate cliffhangers so I fill it up with nonsense.
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:iconaskart:
~Askart Jul 30, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
it's so awesome ;A;
I wished I entered in the contest >w<
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